9.28.2007

Project 1 : Investigation 2

This investigation looks into changing the design, structure and content of the magazine. I restructured the content to involve more of the community and all levels of photographers. I also looked at adding more of the photographers personality and bio to the magazine, something that is not in the current publication. In this redesign, I also encourage critique and added an element to create conversation around the photos with the intent that they would go online to post comments.

Critiqued with Denise
FEEDBACK/COMMENTS that I took from the critique:

• Magazine format is too literal, it has everything that is expected to be seen in a magazine; cover, table of contents, size.
• Design is also too literal and cliche; i.e. showing multiple photos, using handlettering for the bio page
• Rethink the purpose of a magazine and how people interact with it, how do I tell the backstories of the photos in an interesting way?



Investigation 2

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